Stop doing charity flashes XD You have potential
I'm not taking off for the quality problems :P The actual animation and art was good, it's just the story I didn't like :/ I didn't really understand it... I thought the old guy was her father, but the I read your comments. Maybe explain the plot a bit more and make it less of a chick flick romance movie cliche and you'll get a 10/10 :P Other than some issues with the plot, it was awesome. Keep up the good work! :D
That was incredible. I honestly could see that as an opening to a full length movie. Fantastic! 5/5, 10/10
Reminds me of superjail :P
Nice song, excellent animation, great plot :P 5/5, 10/10
your animation is amazing for just three days. The only thing I would suggest is to work on the plot more. It did'nt entirely make sense.
I liked it
FUCKING AWESOME!!! 5/5
besides the horrible lip sync
it is awesome 5/5
kind of weird
but it is still awesome 5/5
that was awesome
best numa parody ever
for a first flash ever its better than most of the shit submitted to the portal
Yea, That's the very thing I tried to stay away from. Thanks man.
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