Stop doing charity flashes XD You have potential
I'm not taking off for the quality problems :P The actual animation and art was good, it's just the story I didn't like :/ I didn't really understand it... I thought the old guy was her father, but the I read your comments. Maybe explain the plot a bit more and make it less of a chick flick romance movie cliche and you'll get a 10/10 :P Other than some issues with the plot, it was awesome. Keep up the good work! :D